This statistic shows us how dramatic the financial crisis is at the moment. It’s an insight of the month March 2008 until February 2009. The x-axis shows the months and the y-axis demonstrates the number of shares from this company. In common the line is tending downward permanently since July. At the beginning the shares staid very constant and in March it reached the final peak with about 8812 shares in March and July, but then the line is falling continually. Above all at the end of September the line dropped abrupt until December. In January the crisis is tending to recover and rise very slowly
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exp: It gives you an insight into the developments from ... to ...
exp: shares of this company
exp: 'in common' ???
exp: there is a downward trend / has been a downward trend since ....
exp: the value of the shares (?) ... / hold steady
g: the shares (they) peaked for the last time
exp/t: since then the value of the shares has fallen
exp: It is striking (not 'above all') that ... dropped abruptly
exp/t: Since then the value has been rising slowly
Quite a lot of mistakes. You should also use the vocabulary that we looked at.
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